Read and review, anyone?

WELL MY FRIEND,.... i like the way you are willing to accept any critic to your hard work,.. but let me tell you, when you start a story you have to transport the reader to the very moment ithe plot or the begining is happening,.. when i read your stuff made me wonder more about the enviroment is about,.. and i have to say that i didnt feel it at all, its not about to tell exacly everything is around but to tell about "the areas from the enviroment that talk about it by themselves" remember that the real work of a writer is to make the reader feel what you want them to feel in the moment they read it,.. then to control their feelings in the way they just cant stop reading and reading, keep up the good work.