1/2/11 Rate/Fix my yugioh deck?

Take out Dark Tinker, Blizzard Defender of I.B., Double Coston, The Shallow Grave, Demotion is negotiable...I mean what would lowering the stars by two do... and thats really it. Your deck seems Okay. Try to make a deck exclusive to one attribute, Type, or faction. And this deck seems like it relies on Clear Vice Dragon or on the hopes a Synchro will get to the field. Try to change that and do some yu gi moto stuff. For example, I had a dark deck. The effect of a card was destroy all cards on the field (Torrntial tribute.) My card had 1700 attack points. He had 5 cards on the field (monsters) I simply summoned the monster with 1700 attack points used torrential tribute destroyed all cards used the monster I just destroyed's effect which allowed me to send a card from my deck to the graveyard. I chose Dark Simorgh whose effect it It can be special summoned from the grave to the field by discarding a wind and a dark form your hand (see how that helps out my other cards) I summoned it used United we stand attacked directly and ended the duel